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Prompt 7 -a tritina

07 Thursday Apr 2016

Posted by Christine Cochrane in NaPoWriMo 30 Poems in 30 Days April 2016

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Our prompt for Day Seven comes to us from Gloria Gonsalves, who challenges us all to write a tritina. The tritina is a shorter cousin to the sestina, involving three, three-line stanzas, and a final concluding line. Three “end words” are used to conclude the lines of each stanza, in a set pattern of ABC, CAB, BCA, and all three end words appear together in the final line.

Confused? No problem — here’s an example!

Tritina for Susannah

The water off these rocks is green and cold.
The sandless coast takes the tide in its mouth,
as a wolf brings down a deer or lifts its child.

I walked this bay before you were my child.
Your fingers stinging brightly in the cold,
I take each one and warm it in my mouth.

Though I’ve known this shore for years, my mouth
holds no charms of use to you, my child.
You will have to learn the words to ward off cold

and know them cold, child, in your open mouth.

–David Yezzi

Here’s my tritina:

Tritina for Tiree’s Ringing Stone

From Balphetrish over moorland lies the way
to where the ringing boulder sings its song
when struck with stones beside the dark grey sea.

They say you came from Rhum across the sea
carried by ice sheets, left upon the way,
erratic filled with melody and song.

and if you split and shatter on that way
where seals swim in the brooding dark grey sea
Tiree will sink beneath the ocean’s song –

the sea way silent, gone the ringing song.

When set a form as the main aim, I find it difficult to settle on a theme.  The words of David Yezzi’s poem led me to the sea and the Ringing Stone on the island of Tiree where we walked last summer. The stone is a glacial erratic which stands on the north side of the island west of Balphetrish village. In the Neolithic Period it was carved with many cup-marks which suggest it was of symbolic significance to the people of that period. It is known in the Gaelic language as ‘Clach a’ Choire’ and, also ‘The Gong Stone’ due to the ringing, metallic noise it makes when struck with another stone. There are a number of legends associated with the stone, one being that if the stone is ever split open the island of Tiree will disappear beneath the waves.

Prompt 6 – the theme of food

06 Wednesday Apr 2016

Posted by Christine Cochrane in NaPoWriMo 30 Poems in 30 Days April 2016

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Here’s the prompt:

Today, I challenge you to write a poem about food. This could be a poem about a particular food, or about your relationship to food in general. Or it could simply be a poem relating an incident that involves food, like David Ignatow’s “The Bagel”.

My response goes back a long way:

The Cake Stand

It was about my height
in deep, dark wood
inset with shining butterflies:
mother of pearl, you said

On Sundays by the fire
we would start from the top
and work down, sipping tea
from flowered china cups.

White triangles of sandwich
or soft bridge rolls filled with
yellow mashed banana or
pink salmon from John West tins.

On the middle tier a cake,
an iced Victoria sponge;
or your warm scones, spread
with garden strawberry jam.

At floor level your shortbread
cut out with crinkled edges,
pricked with four fork marks
and dusted with sugar.

On warm summer days you took
the cake stand to the garden,
filled it with strawberry tarts,
listened to birdsong.

Years later I touch the glass
of a museum case and see it;
the dark wood, the butterflies
and my memories.

Prompt 5 – the pleasures of heirloom plant seeds

05 Tuesday Apr 2016

Posted by Christine Cochrane in NaPoWriMo 30 Poems in 30 Days April 2016

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Here’s today’s prompt:

April is a time for planting things. I’ve recently been paging through seed catalogs, many of which feature “heirloom” seeds with fabulous names. Consider the “Old Ivory Egg” tomato, the “Ozark Razorback” or “Fast Lady” cow-pea, “Neal’s Paymaster” dent corn, or the “Tongues of Fire” bush bean. Today, I challenge you to spend some time looking at the names of heirloom plants, and write a poem that takes its inspiration from, or incorporates the name of, one or more of these garden rarities. To help you out, here are links to the Southern Exposure Seed Exchange and the Baker Creek Seed Company. Also, here’s a hint – tomatoes seem to be prime territory for elaborate names. And who knows, maybe you’ll even find something to plant in your garden! Happy writing!

The prompt came in late on a busy day and I thought I was going to be stumped again, as my knowledge of heirloom plants in non-existent.  However, dipping into the Baker Creek Seed Company’s website was a colourful experience which gave me a character called Plum Granny Muskmelon and some very nice veg names.  This poem had a few variants before it found its form.  It started as a series of haiku verses.  However, these had no zing about them and I realised that Plum Granny Muskmelon was asking for rhyme and rhythm.  It might even be a song.

Plum Granny Muskmelon, what do you grow?
What’s your take on those heritage seeds?
Do you go all organic in every respect –
in your farming, your diet, your deeds?

My purple potato is molokai sweet,
my corn it is hopi pink,
my peas are red rippers, my carrots are black –
my radish green luebo I think.

Jing orange okra is simply the best
and I love to grow rich scarlet kale.
Eat a rainbow each day!  It’s the only way
to be healthy and hearty and hale.

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