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And now, for our prompt (optional, as always). This one sounds simple, but it can be pretty difficult. Today, I challenge you to write a poem that includes a line that you’re afraid to write. This might be because it expresses something very personal that makes you uncomfortable – either because of its content (“I always hated grandma”), or because it seems too emotional or ugly or strange (“I love you so much I would eat a cockroach for you”). Or even because it sounds too boring or expected (“You know what? I like cooking noodles and going to bed at 7 p.m.”). But it should be something that you’re genuinely a little scared to say. Happy (or if not happy, brave) writing!
Here’s my response: it’s all about the last word.
The Visitor
I did not ask you to come
but you moved in –
starved me, hurt me,
made me tired and thin.
I sought help to fight you,
won the battle at risk
to myself, stepped out
hairless into spring.
Now I live not knowing
if you still lurk
in shaded corners
waiting to kill.
Oh my goodness Christine – this one took my breath away
Very powerful x
I know … it’s quite a scary poem. But an honest one too!
This is not one to like, it is one to admire. x
Thanks, Dee. A prompt that forces you to be honest. Having a good time on my hols while I write it though!
Wow, that really hits home. I share Maureen’s reaction! Well done.
Very hard to write about what you don’t want to say, but actually it produces the sort of gritty poem people want to read, I think. It’s all true.
Powerful stuff, Christine. And I’m impressed you are keeping up while you’re away!
Early morning before the king-size breakfast, Divyam. Then out to live and walk on the beach!