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Prompt 11 – a surprise ending

11 Monday Apr 2016

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And now for today’s prompt! Today, I challenge you to write a poem in which you closely describe an object or place, and then end with a much more abstract line that doesn’t seemingly have anything to do with that object or place, but which, of course, really does.  An abstract, philosophical kind of statement closing out a poem that is otherwise intensely focused on physical, sensory details. Happy writing!

Here’s my response.  I’ve been on a little holiday with some finer dining than we’re used to – not as fine as what’s described in this poem, but I’ve been inspired a little here by the poetry of ‘menu speak’.

Dinner

Amuse-bouche of carrocino,
pate de foie gras
livers of plump geese
topped with quail’s egg
drizzled with truffle oil,
Scottish oak-smoked salmon
garnish of rich dark caviar,
velvet vichysoisse topped
with light foam of leeks,
saddle of Highland venison
with juniper berries and
a red wine reduction,
panna cotta with plum compote
finished with amaretto,
platter of French cheeses,
scattered with black grapes.

And the sun sets
over hills of Africa
as you stir the cookpot
with your thin hand.

Prompt 10 – a book spine poem

10 Sunday Apr 2016

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Today’s prompt comes to us from Lillian Hallberg. She challenges us to write a “book spine” poem. This involves taking a look at your bookshelves, and writing down titles in order (or rearranging the titles) to create a poem. If you want to take things a step further, Lillian suggests gathering a list of titles from your shelves (every third or fifth book, perhaps, if you have a lot) and using the titles, as close to the originals as possible, to create a poem that is seeded throughout with your own lines, interjections, and thoughts. Happy writing!

Thought I was stuck again as I am away from home and my own books. However, I solved the problem by taking a few titles from my Kindle library.

Spinechiller

Secrets of the sea house –
sacred country, sea of ink.
Elizabeth is missing:
island wife out stealing horses.

The shock of the fall
arriving at your own door:
sunset song in another light,
burial rites then life after life.

 

I have added little to the book titles but I did shuffle the order round to get a kind of story!

Prompt 9 – going where I fear to tread

09 Saturday Apr 2016

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And now, for our prompt (optional, as always). This one sounds simple, but it can be pretty difficult. Today, I challenge you to write a poem that includes a line that you’re afraid to write. This might be because it expresses something very personal that makes you uncomfortable – either because of its content (“I always hated grandma”), or because it seems too emotional or ugly or strange (“I love you so much I would eat a cockroach for you”). Or even because it sounds too boring or expected (“You know what? I like cooking noodles and going to bed at 7 p.m.”). But it should be something that you’re genuinely a little scared to say. Happy (or if not happy, brave) writing!

Here’s my response:  it’s all about the last word.

The Visitor

I did not ask you to come
but you moved in –
starved me, hurt me,
made me tired and thin.

I sought help to fight you,
won the battle at risk
to myself, stepped out
hairless into spring.

Now I live not knowing
if you still lurk
in shaded corners
waiting to kill.

Prompt 8 – a poem inspired by a flower

08 Friday Apr 2016

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And now, for our prompt.  It’s Friday, and writing poems isn’t easy! So let’s give ourselves a break with a simple prompt today. Poets have been writing about flowers since, oh, the dawn of time. So today, I challenge you to add your own poem to this long tradition, by finding a flower, and versifying in its honour. Happy writing!

A simple prompt, and a simple poem in response.  Not all poems have to be long!

Oh, flower of Scotland

Feisty lady with purple punk hair
you have spiky edges to your leaves:
beware the prickle
of the thistle.

Prompt 7 -a tritina

07 Thursday Apr 2016

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Our prompt for Day Seven comes to us from Gloria Gonsalves, who challenges us all to write a tritina. The tritina is a shorter cousin to the sestina, involving three, three-line stanzas, and a final concluding line. Three “end words” are used to conclude the lines of each stanza, in a set pattern of ABC, CAB, BCA, and all three end words appear together in the final line.

Confused? No problem — here’s an example!

Tritina for Susannah

The water off these rocks is green and cold.
The sandless coast takes the tide in its mouth,
as a wolf brings down a deer or lifts its child.

I walked this bay before you were my child.
Your fingers stinging brightly in the cold,
I take each one and warm it in my mouth.

Though I’ve known this shore for years, my mouth
holds no charms of use to you, my child.
You will have to learn the words to ward off cold

and know them cold, child, in your open mouth.

–David Yezzi

Here’s my tritina:

Tritina for Tiree’s Ringing Stone

From Balphetrish over moorland lies the way
to where the ringing boulder sings its song
when struck with stones beside the dark grey sea.

They say you came from Rhum across the sea
carried by ice sheets, left upon the way,
erratic filled with melody and song.

and if you split and shatter on that way
where seals swim in the brooding dark grey sea
Tiree will sink beneath the ocean’s song –

the sea way silent, gone the ringing song.

When set a form as the main aim, I find it difficult to settle on a theme.  The words of David Yezzi’s poem led me to the sea and the Ringing Stone on the island of Tiree where we walked last summer. The stone is a glacial erratic which stands on the north side of the island west of Balphetrish village. In the Neolithic Period it was carved with many cup-marks which suggest it was of symbolic significance to the people of that period. It is known in the Gaelic language as ‘Clach a’ Choire’ and, also ‘The Gong Stone’ due to the ringing, metallic noise it makes when struck with another stone. There are a number of legends associated with the stone, one being that if the stone is ever split open the island of Tiree will disappear beneath the waves.

Prompt 6 – the theme of food

06 Wednesday Apr 2016

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Here’s the prompt:

Today, I challenge you to write a poem about food. This could be a poem about a particular food, or about your relationship to food in general. Or it could simply be a poem relating an incident that involves food, like David Ignatow’s “The Bagel”.

My response goes back a long way:

The Cake Stand

It was about my height
in deep, dark wood
inset with shining butterflies:
mother of pearl, you said

On Sundays by the fire
we would start from the top
and work down, sipping tea
from flowered china cups.

White triangles of sandwich
or soft bridge rolls filled with
yellow mashed banana or
pink salmon from John West tins.

On the middle tier a cake,
an iced Victoria sponge;
or your warm scones, spread
with garden strawberry jam.

At floor level your shortbread
cut out with crinkled edges,
pricked with four fork marks
and dusted with sugar.

On warm summer days you took
the cake stand to the garden,
filled it with strawberry tarts,
listened to birdsong.

Years later I touch the glass
of a museum case and see it;
the dark wood, the butterflies
and my memories.

Prompt 5 – the pleasures of heirloom plant seeds

05 Tuesday Apr 2016

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Here’s today’s prompt:

April is a time for planting things. I’ve recently been paging through seed catalogs, many of which feature “heirloom” seeds with fabulous names. Consider the “Old Ivory Egg” tomato, the “Ozark Razorback” or “Fast Lady” cow-pea, “Neal’s Paymaster” dent corn, or the “Tongues of Fire” bush bean. Today, I challenge you to spend some time looking at the names of heirloom plants, and write a poem that takes its inspiration from, or incorporates the name of, one or more of these garden rarities. To help you out, here are links to the Southern Exposure Seed Exchange and the Baker Creek Seed Company. Also, here’s a hint – tomatoes seem to be prime territory for elaborate names. And who knows, maybe you’ll even find something to plant in your garden! Happy writing!

The prompt came in late on a busy day and I thought I was going to be stumped again, as my knowledge of heirloom plants in non-existent.  However, dipping into the Baker Creek Seed Company’s website was a colourful experience which gave me a character called Plum Granny Muskmelon and some very nice veg names.  This poem had a few variants before it found its form.  It started as a series of haiku verses.  However, these had no zing about them and I realised that Plum Granny Muskmelon was asking for rhyme and rhythm.  It might even be a song.

Plum Granny Muskmelon, what do you grow?
What’s your take on those heritage seeds?
Do you go all organic in every respect –
in your farming, your diet, your deeds?

My purple potato is molokai sweet,
my corn it is hopi pink,
my peas are red rippers, my carrots are black –
my radish green luebo I think.

Jing orange okra is simply the best
and I love to grow rich scarlet kale.
Eat a rainbow each day!  It’s the only way
to be healthy and hearty and hale.

Prompt 4 – the cruelest month

04 Monday Apr 2016

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In his poem “The Wasteland”, T.S. Eliot famously declared that “April is the cruelest month.” But is it? I’d have thought February. Today I challenge you to write a poem in which you explore what you think is the cruelest month, and why. Perhaps it’s September, because kids have to go back to school. Or January, because the holidays are over and now you’re up to your neck in snow. Or maybe it’s a month most people wouldn’t think of (like April), but which you think of because of something that’s happened in your life. Happy (or, if not happy, not-too-cruel) writing!

Which month to choose?  I initially jumped to November, because it’s a forgotten month; the year gathers pace towards the end and people are so  busy anticipating Christmas that it gets forgotten.  But it’s not cruel, and you can still enjoy the autumn colours in the first half.  January can be harsh, but it holds the promise of a new year ahead.  In the end I settled on March.  This is why:

Mad March

March you are fickle:
with your brisk name
you push us forward,
one
great
leap
towards the point
of equal day and night,
the lure of warmth,
the end to darkness.
You paint in yellow,
wake us with birdsong,
tease us with T-shirt days
in sheltered gardens;
and then you take us
back
to
winter.
You sting and bite,
bury crocuses in snow,
and whip up bitter winds,
laughing as we reach
for scarves and hats
to watch daffodils dance
in the hail.

Prompt 3 – A fan letter

03 Sunday Apr 2016

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I challenge you to write a poem in the form of a fan letter to a celebrity. Now, this could be a celebrity from long ago, and needn’t be an actor or singer (though it could be). You could write to George Washington or Dorothy Dandridge, Marie Curie or The Weekend. Happy writing!

OK, I thought you’d got me here.  I despise the word ‘celebrity’ and anything to do with ‘celebrity culture’ – where anyone who has had a role in a soap or has wailed briefly on ‘The Voice’ is referred to as a ‘star’.  I have never written a fan letter in my life.  But then I had some unexpected fun with it.  This poem is, I think, better for being short.

Hiya Jane, I just wanted to say
your books are like totally awesome.
OMG I never thought Emma would
finish up with that Mr Knightley;
I mean he calls in on like the first page
and sits with her and her dad and that.
I never saw it coming.  Amazeballs.
And OMG Pride and Prejudice was so cool.
Have to say the title didn’t grab me  –
it was like kind of abstract? –
but I started reading and I was like
how are they all going to get a guy?
Another page turner, and some
well fit soldiers too.  Thanks, Jane.  x

Prompt 2 – a family portrait

02 Saturday Apr 2016

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Thank you to all who said they liked yesterday’s lune!

Here’s today’s prompt:

I challenge you to write a poem that takes the form of a family portrait. You could write, for example, a stanza for each member of your family. You could also find an actual snapshot of your family and write a poem about it, spending a little bit of time on each person in the picture. You don’t need to observe any particular form or meter. Happy writing!

My response is based on a photograph that came out at family slide shows!

Spotlight

In the days when years are long
we celebrate their silver wedding.

After the melon cocktail.
the turkey, the raspberry gateau
and Liebfraumilch sipped from
sparkling Edinburgh crystal
we stand, the family four –
heels sink into mossy lawn,
our father grey-suited, serious,
our mother laughs in
joyous, flowered crimplene.

For me a dress from Richard Shops
faux denim patchwork pattern,
platform-soled sandals my firm base,
make up by Mary Quant sets off
black page-boy hair by Vidal Sassoon.

And you with the Monkees hairstyle,
red kipper tie, brash checked jacket
and grey trousers flaring to infinity
smile for the camera, hoping
the posing will soon be over.

In later years we linger,
hold this moment of silver light.

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